Criterion A: 6/10- The knowledge of the text is there, but the examples used could have been better and there could have been more examples to justify the claims.
Criterion B: 5/10- The literary features are stated but they could have been expanded on and related back to the author's purpose.
Criterion C: 4/5- The organization is clear and laid out in the beginning of the IOC and the use of topic sentences helped with the organization.
Criterion D: 3/5- There were lots of pauses and the vocabulary was not as sophisticated; the grammar was adequate but not accurate 100% of the time.
